Ok, so I busted out with the first ten pages here. At this point I'll be updating Chandra every TUESDAY and FRIDAY. If the update schedule ever changes it will say so in the right sidebar.
So, Dr. Bannister is at large? Where could he be? I'm trying my hardest here to create a good rapport between Jason and Marcella. It doesn't entirely work yet. The thing about Chandra is this: I'm still waffling on the opening of the book. I have two directions I could go. This one that you're reading, which is the slow build. Or I can take a few pages from later in the book, around page 40, and put them at the start and go with the modern "start with a bang and then work through flashback to get us up to speed." Is that what people prefer these days?
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