Yeah, it is a terrible joke. I think Jason is coming across as a bit of a creep in this scene. I swear he's a nice guy. One thing I found difficult about this project was how to go about injecting the life stories that I wrote for each character into what the reader sees about them. It's successful on different levels depending on the character. Some ended up coming across very flat, while others ended up feeling a bit richer. I'll leave it up to you guys to let me know what's working and what's not.
You know how when you watch a movie or read a book and you go "Oh stupid, why did they do that?" Well, here's your chance to help with the direction of THIS project. Crowd-sourced editing, that's what I want here. Your payment is the satisfaction that you've made a difference. That's worth more than gold.
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